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Pull the Trigger... by ~4myself:icon4myself:





Death:
     
     my empty darkness
    
     my eternal sleep

     my final rest
     
     my absolute peace

   the end of my day
   that would never stop

   the end of my hike
   trying to reach the top

     my silent tranquility
     
     my everlasting calm

   numbness that lays
   in my right hand's palm

   painless and fast
   darkness then peace

   the setting sun
   a final relief
©2005-2009 ~4myself
:icon4myself:

Author's Comments

Title: "Pull The Trigger and The Nightmare Stops" from Coheed and Cambrea
(the pic is jus a symbol i made up in like 7th grade. :P give me some credit, its on paintshop lol)

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:iconicy-demon-lord:
Nicely written love, though I would like to question the insperation?

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Alone I walk, never to be
I cry for you why cant you see
Bleeding heart, never with glee
:icon4myself:
life

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Rhyming isn't everything
It's the meaning behind the words
Feelings that are put there
By a writter's heart and soul
:tux:
:iconbought:
it is mostest prettiest. i usually hate poems like this. but you did it so beautifully.

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::no i don't have a gun, believe me. you'd be the first to know::
:iconthunorrad:
:clap: :clap:

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-= John 3:17 =-
:icon4myself:
heh thanx :)

--
Rhyming isn't everything
It's the meaning behind the words
Feelings that are put there
By a writter's heart and soul
:tux:
:icon4myself:
lol thx

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Rhyming isn't everything
It's the meaning behind the words
Feelings that are put there
By a writter's heart and soul
:tux:
:iconbluetreesgreenskies:
very nice. :)

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BLUEtreesGREENskies
(_.-‘¯*~._.BTGS._.~* ¯’-._)
-Because things aren't always as they seem-
:icon4myself:
thank you :)

--
Rhyming isn't everything
It's the meaning behind the words
Feelings that are put there
By a writter's heart and soul
:tux:
:iconclam-chowder:
You made death seem so tranquil and peacefull yet.. I dont know. I cant find the word to describe it. :+fav: NIcely done

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love is only your imagination.

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